Okay! Yes, indeedy, I just added a new chapter! Be sure to check it out! Just in case: -

The Birth of a Legend

Thanks for any reviews! Once again, I would like site reviews, but of course say anything here.

Cheers again!

EDIT:Oh, forgot to mention, as before the site updates itself every 24 hours, but I don't know at which hour, so you may have to wait before the new chapter shows up.

[ 03-21-2004, 11:51 AM: Message edited by: slicer15 ]

Well, I see its starting to get interesting. Keep up the good work.

Okay folks! Updated again! Not much of a new change unfortunately...I re-wrote the Prologue, giving it some more content. I hope you guys like it!

Once again, if it's not there, check back later, as the site may have updated.

Thank you very much, those of you that do read it! I really appreciate the comments! [img]smile.gif[/img]

I only noticed one mistake:
Here it should be wandered instead of wondered.

...argh...Thanks! Woops...just a little typo, heh. I'll change that with the next update.

Thanks again!

No problem. I am really enjoying the story by the way. When are you doing the next update?

Hm, hopefully within the next few weeks. I'm on holiday off of school at the moment, but even now I have work to do. Ugh. But I'll try to update more frequently. ^_^ I don't think the next one will take as long as this.

Thanks for reading it! [img]smile.gif[/img]

Sorry about the double post...dammit...¬_¬

I updated! Unfortunately this one is a little shorter than the rest, but a normal full length one will be up next! I promise! This was just a nice way to tie up the chapter.

The link is here. Please review, on the site or on this topic!

Remember, the site has to update!

Thanks guys, for those of you that do read it, I really appreciate your attention and feedback. [img]smile.gif[/img]

Here you are missing a word, probably he or you. Otherwis great ending to the chapter. Keep up the good work.

EDIT: When is the next update?

[ 04-20-2004, 05:03 PM: Message edited by: dplax ]

This was one of the best reads I have had in ages. Im thinking of taking up creative writing myself, and this piece is how it SHOULD be done.